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I hope he didn't forget to tell Mr Rodgers to beat the devil out of it!

Despite the sad news of the death of the greatest man to ever live dieing.
we have respite in this movie.

you win the internet and my heart

newgrounds is predominantly used by those who speak the English language
i think that the option for the movie to have its dialogue displayed in English would open this to a wider audience

that aside the art work was good but some things detract from that

for example instead of having the character glide across with simple tweening adding a walk cycle or a side pose would improve the animation

i will admit i didnt punch every letter into google translate so i can only judge your story by the Author Comments

i just tried clicking what i assumed was a "next" button to progress through the submission

but anyway
decide weather this should be a game or movie you could develop this into either

if it is to be a movie you need more characters and dialogues between so that the viewer can infer from this what the character is like instead of just being told

if its to be a game you need to challenge the player and give the player incentive to continue

Mattylew responds:

This is supposed to be a digital "booklet" for children to read, having to click "next" was a part of the assignment that I had to add. Also, this is based on Norwegian fairytales, which makes few characters a part of it as well as the fact that there's a lot more telling thatn actual dialogue.

I do know the animation isn't very good, but I did only use Adobe InDesign for the animation-part here. This was made as a school project to learn more about InDesign and how you can use the animation-features there. The time we have to make these kinds of projects isn't very long either, and I do understand that I could have done a better job if I didn't use so much time on making the characters and the background, as well as the story, but I am pretty much happy with how it ended up.

Making this project in Norwegian was something I had to do, but I am considering to make an English version as well.

Recent Game Reviews

48 Game Reviews

Nice old-school feel to this!
i like the style and the interactive elements, you even let the viewer customize the protagonist.

i like the way you could go on for a while with the way you organized a dozen animations to cycle through.

and the voice acting though nice seemed a bit like Death by power-point could have added a bit more to stimulate the audience especially since we are listening to the same thing often.
perhaps you could click the wrong thing and have your mistake explained, i dunno

still this has potential to be fun its just you could still make it more like a game or have a story as a framing device
you could check(in movie) the forecast or data and that will guide you

Thank you for uploading but we have decided that you are a good candidate for this submission.

I found a glitch
If you get to the ending where both his wife and daughter are killed

when you go to the park at the end you can see molly on his back until he walks

is that a glitch or is it supposed to be a ghost

The story and plot has been done a thousand times
but that doesn't mean this game is lacking

good graphics well selected music and alternate endings
and decent game play

10/10 & 5/5

Recent Audio Reviews

6 Audio Reviews

i like the start angelic like opening piece

i like how it didn't clash but instead complimented the rest of the piece

My vote is for Vinstigator

i love it

i think that this is an amazing piece that deserves more recognition

Oh ho ho

Iz funny cause you ban people
ha ha yes
iz funny

why is this not played when you get the error message saying you are banned

fix it in the re design

now i am going to listen to this on loop for
2 days, 8 hours & 42 minutes

C ya l8R

Recent Art Reviews

8 Art Reviews

Forgive me father for i have been living like a porcupine!

OH MY GOD

IT IS JESUS

yes

why it is not only " Good Enough" its marvelous

EduChico responds:

Usually, the titles of my drawings are song titles.
"Good Enough" is a song from Evanescence, that I like very much, as she did.
Thanks for the positive reply. As always, it's greatly appreciated.

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