straberrykiler6789's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Irmelin og Midgaardsormen]

newgrounds is predominantly used by those who speak the English language
i think that the option for the movie to have its dialogue displayed in English would open this to a wider audience

that aside the art work was good but some things detract from that

for example instead of having the character glide across with simple tweening adding a walk cycle or a side pose would improve the animation

i will admit i didnt punch every letter into google translate so i can only judge your story by the Author Comments

i just tried clicking what i assumed was a "next" button to progress through the submission

but anyway
decide weather this should be a game or movie you could develop this into either

if it is to be a movie you need more characters and dialogues between so that the viewer can infer from this what the character is like instead of just being told

if its to be a game you need to challenge the player and give the player incentive to continue

Mattylew responds:

This is supposed to be a digital "booklet" for children to read, having to click "next" was a part of the assignment that I had to add. Also, this is based on Norwegian fairytales, which makes few characters a part of it as well as the fact that there's a lot more telling thatn actual dialogue.

I do know the animation isn't very good, but I did only use Adobe InDesign for the animation-part here. This was made as a school project to learn more about InDesign and how you can use the animation-features there. The time we have to make these kinds of projects isn't very long either, and I do understand that I could have done a better job if I didn't use so much time on making the characters and the background, as well as the story, but I am pretty much happy with how it ended up.

Making this project in Norwegian was something I had to do, but I am considering to make an English version as well.

[If I Had One]

this is the one daily first that shouldnt have that award

not due to the quality but due to the subject matter therein

WooleyWorld responds:

Th... Thanks?

[Just A Bit Crazy Remake]

this movie is invalid

you are a noob and a tri force was on the shirt

leave new grounds and don't come back until you have something that is worth watching

this movie is epic fail made by obvious noob
yet it include triforce
DOES NOT COMPUTE

JakesTV responds:

I know there is a triforce.

All of us are based on ourselfs in real life

The one with the triforce shirt LOVES zelda games.

[EW Fanmade- Toms Eyes]

needs voices

they should at least move there mouths
and maybe it could be voiced

if you watch the Edds word cartoons where tom temporarily has eyes
you would see that he responds positively to having eyes

the point of animation is to create the illusion of movement

maybe you should have animated the part where he draws the eyes

add a back ground and don't make the characters look stretched and distorted

JakesTV responds:

Thanks for the feedback

[Trolls Trolling Trolls]

im going to leave an idiotic reveiw
just to cause some drama

CardsNarg responds:

You Bastard!

[Meme Love]

This is un original rehached shit
If you were trying to make it like a rage comic
you forgot that rage comics were supposed to be funny or at least try to be funny

Draw some ORIGINAL characters
Have a plot line that hasn't been done a billion times
if you're going to use wmm than at least add more frames

and if you did this in flash it would be half a megabyte in size if audio is compressed properly
rather than a shitty unfunny poorly optimized no preeloader heap of shit

JJThaFish responds:

Do you have anything good to say?

[Get Better Soon Edd!]

good

i think you should get a pre loader
it may be less than half a megabyte
but pre loaders are good for playback

are you trying to emulate Edd's worlds style
if so i think you did it well

maybe you should put some more backgrounds there

although this is probably just a simple animation test

i think you will be a good animator

the name Ophostus will be known by all who use newgrounds
if you make a longer movie and clean up the animation and backgrounds a little

i will Recommend this for the eddsworld collection

Ophostus responds:

Thanks for your tip's ill put them in for consideration, also you dont know how happy it makes me to hear that you think ill be big on new grounds!!!!

[Zombie Shot In Eye]

2.01 / 5.00 (+ 0.080)

this is actually ok

you used good fitting music

but you said " i might make more if i get good reviews "

well if you do here is one piece of advice make it at least 30 seconds or longer

was that your voice?

if so it was done well
but you used a shitty microphone

kyle789XBL responds:

YES and I agree laptop mic sucks

[Chinese Poison Toys]

daily feature is well deserved

this is perfectly animated

with very good sound quality

this should be a Christmas carol
i would like to see those carol singer sing this
silent night, yeah right
fuck all that and Santa Jesus crap
THIS is the true meaning of Christmas

vakavadesigns responds:

I'm doubtful that it's the true meaning of Christmas...

But I WOULD like to see Satan Claus plunge himself and his smelly buck-toothed reindeer permanently into icy Arctic waters...

Ummm anyway, thanks for the review!

[Awesome Face]

Lame

Do Not put music in your PRELOADER
because it defeats the object

you have to wait for the music to finish downloading
before you can see the pre loader

if you must have music get a pre loader for your pre loader

the film was terrible thougn hardly worth the 6 mb Compress your audio

MrSymphonize responds:

Fair enough, I get your point, thankyou. It's just for fun though not to be taken seriously. I know i forgot to.